HoboKa's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Camel Star On-Line - Office Procedures | 2024]

Dag this put me into a trance. Some seriously good 90's chiptune + DnB going on. Kinda reminds me of The Great Giana Sisters. And a bit of C&C 1 hehe.

Bertn1991 responds:

Hey hey, thanks for stopping by. I'm just happy people acknowledge The Great Giana Sisters exist. The music was a high point. Anyways, always nice to hear from you. All the best~

[Blocks]

It's like if you took a Commodore 64 and jammed an i7 chip into its MoBo and took LSD. EPIC!!

[Space Dance]

Beautiful and Magical!

[Silfidex Planet]

Nice blend of retro and modern synth-prog/wave. If you told me this was for an 80's anime I wouldn't bat an eye. Nice work ClitBait.

[Hinekure Musume]

FIRE!!

[Eclipse ☪]

Hypnotic soundscape and vocals! Sexeh.

[Midi-P - Believe ft. Solaria]

The reverb feels a bit dry, it is more of a taste thing, than an objective problem. I think there might be clashing reverb spaces though? Do you separate reverb mixer effects in each sample track, or do you link them all to one mixer track?

If it isn't the reverb, then it might be an E/Q problem. I don't have perfectly linear headphones, so tough for me to tell 100%. Old ones broke and I am super poor atm.

I think that the vocals are clipping dB wise. Could be due to compression or a Limiter with its Gain or Ceiling effect slammed up way too high lol.

Anyhow, I love the drums, e-guitar, the vocal work (wow synth?? Things have really improved...good ole AI).

Production side, there is a bit more to improve upon. Don't think it'll be a huge amount of work for you to improve on. I'm a bad teacher though (plus my own E/Q work is kinda mid). There should be a ton of YT tutorials...also I think you're using FL Studio, judging from your other works that I took a peak at. Could be wrong. Anyhow, if so, FL Studio has a bajillion tutorial videos on E/Q, reverb, using a BUS to link mixer effects, and also on Modulation. [EDIT: oh your instruments section says FL as the DAW...d'oh!]

Keep improving, and you'll get there.

Also on one piece of advise for reverb, I like to exclude kick drums and bass samples from my reverb mixer effect, reduces the mud. Unless it is for like a cavern or cathedral* reverb space effect (or 80's style)

TrandafirTeodora responds:

You're spot on about the EQ and the reverb. I'll try looking at Youtube tutorials about FL Studio for the EQ and reverb, plus tutorial for other effects and mastering.
Thanks for you feedback!

[Zophar's Domain | 2023]

Daaaaamn the atmosphere and phat synths here is just magical. Then the piano at the latter third is just... icing the (vaporwave?) cake. Very introspective and ethereal. Beautiful work Bertn! (Adding this to my mix collection!)

Feels vaguely like an SMT track. Kinda like Soul Hackers or Persona 2.

[Camel Star Ultra | 2022]

This makes you want to do the Robot...love the campy quasi low-fi energy here...sorta Vaporwave-ish too methinks.

Death never felt sexier - referring to the AI art as well as the track (Or am I?)

[Red Peony | 2023]

Oh yeah this banger. It's in my usb mix now muahahaha. I really love that retro swirly flute sample, I need to use it more myself - got it on my Omnisphere hehe. Also, the ambience FX and and the key-vibes are thicc man. Good work :3

Bertn1991 responds:

Thanks for welcoming this tune into your USB mix. A good home, I'm sure. And yep, I'm big-time into Omnisphere. Guilty as charged.

Big, BIG thanks :3